Please critique my site

[alondra]

I am trying to see if I can finally oficially open my etsy store and get it running. Please go give it a look and critique. I would appreciate if you are honest; I can take it!! LOL.

Especially, because I tried to type everything in the Policies section in English and Spanish. Is it too confusing when you look at it?

Thank you!!

www.fancycarriebowtique.etsy.com

[s_hernandez402]

I think it looks good and sounds great. I like that you did spanish and english. I think your ready to add your items!

[alondra]

Thank you! I will try to add them hopefully tonight.
By the way, I looove your website! It is so cute!
Gracias!

[Barbara Jean]

Love your banner and the matching avatar is great! Nice detailed policies. I don't think the dual language layout is too confusing at all. Nicely done!

[mabear74]

I love the site, I think it's great that you did both Spanish and English. Very easy to understand and follow along with.

At the bottom of your Shop's Policy page it seems that under Additional Policies and FAQ's that it is just listed in English.....

[alondra]

Thank you! I am going to try to list something to test.

[alondra]

I love the site, I think it's great that you did both Spanish and English. Very easy to understand and follow along with.

At the bottom of your Shop's Policy page it seems that under Additional Policies and FAQ's that it is just listed in English.....
LOL! You are absolutely right. Will work on it. Thanks.

[cutiepatootiebows]

I think it looks good. You did a great job.

[ammperry2]

I really think that the store is nice. The items you are selling are great as well. I would have really loved that headband for my flower girl.....11 years ago.

[IzzyB]

Very nice! I love your banner. I told my hubby that we need to renew our wedding vows so I can buy your headband for out DD to wear. LOL!

[K's kustom bows]

It looks great! I showed my hubby the headband and he said it looks very fancy. Im glad you decided to list it for more than you first thought you would. Your time is important too... Great job!!

[aknighton]

Love the pinewheel bows. can you send me a tutorial on those they are very cute

[IzzyB]

Love the pinewheel bows. can you send me a tutorial on those they are very cute

I don't think she is selling those instructions.